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Panama Canal

 
More than 60,000,000 pounds of dynamite was used to excavate and construct the Panama Canal. They had to use so much dynamite, because the canal would have been impossible to build with the modern day technology. The Panama Canal is very important, though a lot of people died trying to build it, and people spent a lot of money on it, though a lot of people use it every day.


Because the Panama Canal was difficult to build, many people lost their lives trying to build it. About 20,000 French lost their lives during their control over the Panama Canal. 5,609 workers lost their lives due to accidents and health problems, 80% of those people were black and 350 workers were white Americans. 

There were many difficulties that the workers faced building the canal, six faults and five volcanic cores. Because there were precipitous slopes, flooding was a huge problem because the water would fall down off the steep slope. Another huge problem was two things, malaria fever and yellow fever, people died because of a mist that came from the swamps and marshes. There was also a dense jungle covering the area.


The idea to create a canal that connects the Atlantic and pacific oceans can be tracked to 1513, and in 1534 Charles V. told the people of Panama to survey the area and look for the best route, and their governor said it was impossible for anyone to do. In 1880 the French unsuccessfully tried to build the canal, but had no luck.  The French and the Americans made a treaty, and the canal was successfully built from 1904 – 1914.


The Panama Canal would have been easier to build today than in 1904-1914, because they didn’t have all of our modern day technology. There were many difficulties the workers faced building the canal, and many people lost their lives because of health problems and accidents. They had to use lots of dynamite because their technology wasn’t as advanced as our technology.

Nepal Project

Author's Note: This is a research report. In this process, I learned that Nepal is a unique country. I learned that Mt. Everest is in Nepal. I learned that Nepal started a government in 1951.


Nepal is a unique and interesting country. Nepal is located in south Asia. Nepal has many animals, most of them that might not even be in the United States. Nepal has a variety of climate.  Nepal is the highest country in the world.

Nepal has many religions. Hinduism is the most common religion in Nepal; Buddhism is the second biggest religion, Islam is the third largest religion, Mundhum is, Christianity is the fifth largest religion.

Nepal has many animals. The Indian Rhinoceros rest in the shade near rivers, lakes, and ponds. The Snow leopard is a very uncommon sight because people hunt them and use their organs for their own needs. The Clouded Leopard can use their claws to hang upside down on trees. The Marbled Cat is afraid of humans and its expression turns fierce and is killed by humans. The Red Panda are mainly active at night, when they hunt.


Nepal has a variety of climates. Nepal has mainly arctic climate because it is in a mountain range. Nepal is also has tropical and subtropical climate because of the low altitude. Nepal has cold climate because of the altitude. There is a subarctic climate because of the high altitude.

Nepal has a bunch of different rocks and stones. Limestone is made out of shells that were forced together. Sandstone is sand grains mashed together. Shale is clay that has hardened and turned into rock. Some rocks are fossiliferous, so they include fossilized plants and animals. Some rocks are unfossilferous, so they don’t include fossilized plants and animals.
 
Nepal would be an interesting place to visit, because it has a variety of many things. If you went to Nepal, you would see tons of animals, birds, and mountains.  If I dug in the ground, I would probably find many kinds of rocks and minerals.

5 comments:

  1. Regarding your piece on the Panama Canal, I like how you organized your content into well defined themes separated by paragraphs. The logical flow of information was excellent. I would suggest going a little deeper in the paragraphs analyzing the impact or the causes of what you're writing about. A lot of what you're writing is a report of facts rather than analysis.

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    I learned a lot from it and I liked how you had pictures. I think you had a few sentences that restated facts but that was it other than a few other minor errors.

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    I thought it was good but I agree with Carson, and also for your author's note make it italics because Some people might have trouble with telling what's in your story and what's out of your story. Other than those problems this piece was really good!

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  4. I like how you are reporting about the different places in the world. Your writing demonstrates a good deal of learning. You are intelligent, and I would like your writing to reflect that more by incorporating more of your own opinions and interpretation of the facts. Good job.

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    I thought that the story was very well written, and your transitions were great. You might want to add an Author's Note, but great job.
    ~Redmon

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