Thursday, October 20, 2011

My response to the world

Authors note: In this Story, I give my response to the way the world is, and I explain how the world has changed the last 200-300 years.
The way life is now



I think that it's stupid that the economy has raised the prices of gas, because people are using cars all the time so they need gas, but if gas prices get to high people are going to be stuck walking everywhere and they’re going to have to sell everything they own just to have enough money to buy gas. I also think that it's dumb that some people will kill and steal just to have something that they want, that seems like that's all people do kill, just because they don't like somebody or don't agree with somebody, that's probably how all the wars we have started, just because somebody doesn't agree on the way somebody else runs their country, and it's really stupid that people bomb other people, like Pearl Harbor, Japan bombed us because they were mad at us for something we did to them or something.


Thousands of people die every day because of murderers, terrorist, diseases, and mainly, war, seriously  people thousands of people go into war to, "Serve their country" or to finish the war that we started because we DISAGREE WITH THEM, seriously why can't you talk about it, like "You should stop slavery because it's unfair to the slaves" or something like that. People don't trust other people anymore because the PEOPLE that they don't trust did something that made it so that they don't trust them, like killing somebody, or stealing something from someone,and it also seems like the only thing that people care about is money, like job scams or stealing from banks or tricking someone into doing something that does not give them what they wanted to get from the scam.

People also make fun of other people just because they're a "geek" or a "nerd" or are interested in something that they think is stupid, let’s say someone likes Halo, and someone who likes Call of Duty makes fun of that person that likes Halo, but how would they feel if somebody made fun of them for liking Call of Duty, I don't think that they would like it, another thing that people don't do is listen to rules, for example, the teachers at Asa tell kids they can't play games on their laptops, but what do they do? Play games on their laptops, or don't run in the hallway, so people run in the hallways or something people definitely won't listen to don't say swear words on school grounds but what do I hear? "That was so ------ awesome!" See people don't listen to the rule, that’s why the economy is in bad condition, because people don't listen to rules, like when people are going to cross a crosswalk cars have to stop for them to cross, and no speeding, ha! Like people are going to go 45 mph when their running late to work, people are probably going to go 70 mph so they aren't late.

If people don't want to die than don't smoke cigarettes or drink alcohol! It's as simple as that, but why do people do it? to be cool and fit in with everybody else at school, seriously people know that if they smoke they're going to die, and if they don't die, they're going to end up with a hole in their throat or something, and when their in the hospital and they're being told they're going to die they're going to regret that they smoked just to fit in the same with alcohol. People need to learn that who cares if they fit in, I only have four friends here and I'm okay, I'm just glad that two people aren't in Academy 21, Zach Sack, and Bailey Fidlin, because last year they teased me, and all started when Zach constantly said, "Stop it Andrew.", and I wasn't doing anything, well except for breathing, but I can't stop that, that's what keeps me alive.

 The economy was much simpler in the old days, well it was hard and easy, hard because people did everything by hand, but back then people didn't have to worry about gas, or having enough money to go to the grocery store, because people were always farmers, so they grew their own food, and people hardly left their homes, and now people have to worry about all that stuff, and now people are greedy, all people care about is money, why can't people just get along? I really hope that after everybody at Asa Clark has lived their life and is dead that the world will be better, I hope that everybody has a good life and that their grandchildren live in an economy that is better than ours is now.

I hope that the world gets better and everybody gets along, because friendship and love are the most important things in the world, because if it wasn't for love everybody would be dead. People need to learn to control their anger and talk it out, and people need to learn to trust people, and people need to learn to not be greedy, because friendship is more important than money, people need to learn not to kill somebody because they're mad at them or don't like them, people need to learn to not tease and bully people just because they're a "Nerd" or a "Geek" or because they like something that the bully think is dumb, and people need to stand up for themselves and say, "I'm not scared of you!", people definitely need to learn how to drive for example when my mom tries to get into the right lane to drop me off at school, nobody let's her through, and people need to learn to listen to rules, sure you might not like to listen to rules, but if it wasn't for rules, the world would be in chaos. I hope that you enjoyed reading my story, I know it's longer than all my other posts, if you have any comments or things that you think I can fix, please tell me, I want to hear all your opinions on how you thought my story was.

4 comments:

  1. I thought this was a great post. One thing I noticed is that you said "or something" a lot. I like how you really expressed your feelings. Great Job!

    ReplyDelete
  2. I totally agree. This is a messed up world. Good job

    ReplyDelete
  3. This is TOTALLY AWESOME!!!!!!! For just a young kid you have such a total complete outlook on the world. I hope you have a better feeling for things when you get older. Never let anyone stop you from speaking your mind. Great job.

    ReplyDelete
  4. I thought this was a very thoughtful piece and I liked how you gave an outlook on the world from different perspectives and comparing different things. Good job!

    ReplyDelete